- Gaby
- Blonde, blue eyes and averagely tall.
- To eliminate all rumors from Flying Hills Middle School For Werewolves
- There are rumors in her school that she is on drugs.
- Ashley
- Goddess Esopam and Bullies
- Lipstick, Full wallet, makeup, cellphone...
- She has lost the confidence and trust she once had from her parents because of the untrue rumors.
- She is a very sweet, unselfish girl. She donates 100 weekly dollars to the UNICEF children's fund and she is a very good student.
B.
- Exposition: Introduce the problem, Gaby and the situation.
- Rising Action: Esopam visits and Gaby is proposing the offerings.
- Climax: Esopam allows and accepts the offerings and eliminates the rumors.
- Falling actions/Resolution: The normal day at school and at home. Everything is normal again.
C. My story is a myth because it explains how people live now a days, and some of the problems found in middle schools in a way that involves mythological traits (Goddesses, werewolves, sacrifice. etc).
D. I explained the rumors problem by showing a case of a girl who's life has changed completely because of a rumor. Also, I explained the problem of drugs in the world (even though this is not really a middle school problem).
E. I edited my rough draft by adding places in which the story seemed incomplete. I also fixed the one problem I had in which I confused that with who. I only found those errors when someone else read my story
and they pointed them out to me.
F. I read Mateo Osorio, Ana Maria Samper and Samuel Fajardo's stories. My feedback and comments are in a post I made titled "Feedback on Virtual Stories" and it is in the project section of my blog.
G. Based on the rubric, I think I deserve a 4. I have completed all the necessary work
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