Enter the Epicness

May 26, 2012

Novel Project Step 3.5

Ana Maria Samper

Step 1-1.5
You should have put which part of speech each word is. Everything else is great.

Step 2.0
Some of the sentences do not have the correct word use in them. Like in the second sentence, relented is used as accepted, but that is not the definiton of relented.

Step 2.5
I liked the way you organized it. However, it could have been better to do a table of some sort.

Step 3.0
Please put the title of the book in the passage. It was good that you put the words in bold. Also, I liked the way you put recommendations.

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