Feedback on Novel Project

Input on Alejandro Samper's Project PUT YOUR PROJECT IN THE NOVEL SECTION
1.0-1.5
Good job! There are certain things I would recommend. The first, put the parts of speech of the words and also, for future projects, remember to put words that you really don't know. For example awkward, is a word that I am sure you knew.
2.0
Remember that Ms. Shawn will be checking that you underline the word you changed. Ex. In the word awkward, underline inconvenient.
2.5
Instead of saying that your third category is "just other words", I recommend you put something like "refering to an object or thing" (nouns) and "the description of an object" (adjective)
3.0
I really liked the introduction and how you used any way you could to do this work. I would recommend not to give a whole summary. Just enough so the person is interested or gets hooked in the story. Give recommendations. Things you like and don't like about the book, who will be interested in the story, and just the first parragraph of the story.

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