Comments on Myth

Adult

I liked the story. I enjoyed reading it. It was a bit confusing and not well presented. You should work on organized ideas, because I know what you are trying to say, but you are not saying it very well. 

Pedro

Great story. It was very creative. The only thing I would uggest is to change the word smoker with sniffer and

add new expressions. 

Ana

I loved your story. It was very entertaining but very confusing. I would suggest making it less confusing by changing the sentence structure and the adjectives.